I received this book for an opportunity to read for free in exchange for an honest review.
The
premise of the Birth of Vengeance is that the main character Jonathan
Harper is a teenager that has been bullied and beaten up all through
school. An attack by bullies against his friend leaves him in a
compromising situation and in fear for his safety. His father
immediately relocates the family
As a vampire lover, I
was definitely intrigued by the description of this book. The Birth of
Vengeance (Vampire Formula #1) wasted no time in immediately throwing the issue of bullying
to the forefront. I don’t think that I have ever read a book that did
that before. I felt like there could have been a lot more expounded
upon in the bullying situation, especially on the attack that changes
Jonathan’s life forever. It took about 30% of the book to set up the
story before it really started to get interesting and flow at a more
exciting pace.
The story itself was quite interesting. The
author P. A. Ross faced bullying head on in many different forms. I
also commend him for taking a completely new and interesting look at a
different facet of vampires. The last part of the book made the whole
story worth reading. However, with that being said, it was really hard
to get to that point and read this story. I have edited books that were
more polished than this version. There were constant typos,
grammatical errors, and just plain missing or extra words that would
cause me to pause and try to determine what the author was trying to
say. This felt like reading a rough draft.
P. A. Ross
obviously has a story worth telling and some compelling characters but
the constant errors dulled the shine of his creative mind. I also feel
that at some point the bullied became the bullier, which may have
tarnished the lessons of the book. He needs to polish up this copy and
add in some more detail in the scene setting of the beginning and he
would have a very great book on his hands. At this point, it took me so
long to read such a short story by the constant stopping and
frustration in reading. For that reason I give this book 3.5/5 stars. I
hope to see this cleaned up and re-released to obtain the reception
that it deserves.
from Leeds to London…. Before long,
Jonathan finds himself as a victim between a new gang of bullies which
leads him to events that allow him to be a vampire for one night and he
uses his power to extract his vengeance.
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